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Scott
got 11th<<<<<<<<<<<boring,
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- Our
team
rider <<<<who
is "Our"? ,
Scott See, just got 11th <<<<
out of how many? in the last race
<<<< what dates?
in France. <<<<
where in France?
He was able to finish this hi hicause
of the great new race sails that he was on, the Race
X. These sails were able to give him the edge. The new
luff panel allowed for easier rotation giving him the
ability to make a jibe. We all wish you would have been
their<<<< grammatical
error to see it. It was great. Our mid-season
re-design, which worked really well, will be available
to you in 1999. So check out our sails, they were designed
to be really fast because you need it.<<<<<<<<
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